Some blog feedback
Yasmin left a comment asking me to tell her how to create an “effective blog”.
Here’s her blog.
Notice that there is no compelling data or reason given why the blogger would be the person who can give advice to people to create a fashion statement. Even the user profile page has little on it.
Now to the content itself – it is like a two advertisements, the two posts. They don’t have much personalisation and expect people to find the blog, without linking to other posts/blogs/websites.
So my suggestion would be to showcase her expertise, create more conversations, have a blogroll and let go of the visual heavy lower part of the blog.